Vampko's Secret Writings....

[vampko]

I'm gonna be doing revisions on the four chapters I have done. Yes I have four done. I'll let everyone know when a chapter has finished its revisions. As much as it may seem I outright reject all advice I get, that's just my initial thing, but I will usually try and incorporate it in. Which I think will be noticeable with the revisions to come. A story without pictures needs more than dialogue, I've long since realized this.

[vampko]

Chapter 1 Revision is finished
And no, it's not a complete re-write, just tweaks and stuff here and there. I hope it enhances the experience. From now on I'll be revising my chapters at least once before submitting them here.

Next will be Chapter 2. There might be some big changes in other chapters though, just warning people. Still, it's not a complete re-write.

[vampko]

Chapter 2 has now been revised!

Nothing super huge has been changed, but the changes are bigger than I did for the first chapter.

[vampko]

Chapter 3 is still being worked on, but I will warn that the violence has stepped up substantially, and the story has gotten much darker. There still will be the very lighthearted aspects, but I am warning those whom are expecting something lighthearted all the time.
here's a sample :

Spoiler:

The ground was rife with corpses, limbs, and blood. So much blood, that it almost seemed as if the road was painted crimson. Everywhere one looked you would see an arm or a leg, clearly torn from its base, tendons hanging out, or bones pushing out of the skin.

I doubt it'll get much worse than this, but yeah.

[vampko]

Chapter 3 is now revised and back up!
Please read, and any feedback is much appreciated ~

[vampko]

Made my fanfiction.net debut!
Think I'm gonna wait on some reviews before finishing chapter 2.

[vampko]

My FFnet page
More things have been uploaded and stuff.

[vampko]

Chapter 2 of the P3 Fic has finally been completed!

[vampko]

Yes it's been forever, but
Chapter 4 is now up
It really turned out a lot different than it was going to be originally. A lot of this has stemmed from input I've gotten from various people.