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The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Wed May 18, 2011 12:34 am

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Genre: Shonen, Comedy, Action, Fantasy, Fanfic/Parody(+/-)
Summary: A teenager, Neku Sakuraba, wants to become an emo. But... strange things happen and somehow he ends up fighting against strange people when his weapons are nothing but pins. Well, magical pins of course ;)

It's a comics I made by using character pictures from TWEWY (The World Ends With You). I pretty much left most of the main characters' names and personalities the same as in the game. The reason is: it'll be strange for people who played the game to read a comics with characters that look the same, but have different names and such.
Note that you DON'T have to play the game to understand the comics and there are no REAL spoilers for the game in the comics (though those who played the game might see some similarity now and then). Those who played the game may treat it as an alternative world of the game or whatever (if you played - you know what I'm talking about).
It's starts pretty much as a collection of random jokes and you probably won't see anything too worthwhile as I originally just started a comics which supposed to be pure comedy without any logical plot. But after a while, I actually put some effort into the plot and IMO made something perhaps not "epic", but at the very least "nice".


Site: http://thecomics.thecomicseries.com/

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby vampko » Wed May 18, 2011 2:38 am

This will probably be a summer quarter project for me. There's just too much to read it while I have classes.
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Wed May 18, 2011 5:37 am

vampko wrote:This will probably be a summer quarter project for me. There's just too much to read it while I have classes.



Well, yeah. It's kinda long :lol:

It's my most favorite creation because it's FINISHED AND LONG. (well, not that long but compared to other things I finished it is)

I have a BIG pile of stuff I started and haven't finished and most likely never will.
I'm amazed each and every time I look at this comic.
I all like "wow... I really manged to finish something long... that's a miracle..." . If that makes any sense :lol:
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby Hero » Wed May 18, 2011 5:38 am

40 chapters?!
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby Alura--x--Uneii » Wed May 18, 2011 5:38 am

Trying to be emo. :lol:
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Wed May 18, 2011 5:53 am

Hero wrote:40 chapters?!


Indeed 8-)

But well, you know. It's like a shonen manga. Sometimes a chapter can end in a mere few minutes.
There's even one chapter with like 5 panels :lol:
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby vampko » Wed May 18, 2011 6:17 am

:lol: :lol: :lol:
The first chapter was really funny xD

You had some spelling/grammar errors here and there, but it didn't detract too much from the experience, and anyone should be able to follow it just fine.

That's all I'm reading for now. Maybe I'll read a chapter a day? Or possibly more, but I need to get back to other stuff.
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby Hero » Wed May 18, 2011 6:29 am

yeah, chapter 1 was pretty funny

i just have one minor criticism for now:
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emos don't run!
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Wed May 18, 2011 2:24 pm

^ Glad you think so people. :D

Though, according to my friend:
The first few chapters started nice.
Then it fell apart for while.
At some point the plot started progressing more and it began picking up.
Near the end it surpassed the beginning.

Though, can't say for sure whatever that's true because only one person was nice enough to fully read and criticize this comic from the beginning to the end :roll:

vampko wrote:That's all I'm reading for now. Maybe I'll read a chapter a day? Or possibly more, but I need to get back to other stuff.


This could be nice :D
Though I kinda wonder about Connections (my other work with the P3 characters). I never really managed to make people comment on it when I posted it on another forum whereas I got at least SOME comments on the TWEWY comic.
Guess my feeling about that work was right all along: it sucks. But well, that's expected since I tried a style which doesn't really fit me and in which I just... well... suck :?

Hero wrote:i just have one minor criticism for now:
Spoiler:
emos don't run!


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but wanna-be-emos do
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby vampko » Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:07 am

It's still pretty entertaining, and I've read the first 5 chapters now.
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:08 pm

vampko wrote:It's still pretty entertaining, and I've read the first 5 chapters now.


Well, that's good to know :D
If you can say that much after 5 chapters then I think it's safe to say you'll survive this comic until it "better parts" (or at least I think they are better). I gave the comic to quite some people and most of them already got totally discouraged by chapter 5 or so.
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby vampko » Wed Jun 15, 2011 1:19 am

6-8 were great :lol: :lol: :lol:

Once you get past the poor grammar and typos, it's a really fun read ~
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:25 am

vampko wrote:6-8 were great :lol: :lol: :lol:

Once you get past the poor grammar and typos, it's a really fun read ~


I'm glad at least SOMEONE thinks so :D

I know it's not that amazing and all, but neither do I think it's THAT lame so people drop it after such a short read. Especially when I keep telling them that it'll become much better latter. I can understand if they were people I don't know, but not classmates who I think of as friends. Not "best friends" but at least above the rest of the class :(
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby Nazou » Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:05 am

Spoiler:
*gasp* shock and horror, the guardian spirit is evil.
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Re: The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

Postby darkclaymore » Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:13 am

Nazou wrote:
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*gasp* shock and horror, the guardian spirit is evil.


Hohoho~ I see someone has already reached the "better parts" I'm always talking about

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Thought whatever they are better is debatable I guess :roll:
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