The Comics (TWEWY fanfic)

[darkclaymore]

It's still pretty entertaining, and I've read the first 5 chapters now.

Well, that's good to know
If you can say that much after 5 chapters then I think it's safe to say you'll survive this comic until it "better parts" (or at least I think they are better). I gave the comic to quite some people and most of them already got totally discouraged by chapter 5 or so.

[vampko]

6-8 were great

Once you get past the poor grammar and typos, it's a really fun read ~

[darkclaymore]

6-8 were great

Once you get past the poor grammar and typos, it's a really fun read ~

I'm glad at least SOMEONE thinks so

I know it's not that amazing and all, but neither do I think it's THAT lame so people drop it after such a short read. Especially when I keep telling them that it'll become much better latter. I can understand if they were people I don't know, but not classmates who I think of as friends. Not "best friends" but at least above the rest of the class

[Nazou]

Spoiler:

*gasp* shock and horror, the guardian spirit is evil.

[darkclaymore]

Spoiler:

*gasp* shock and horror, the guardian spirit is evil.

Hohoho~ I see someone has already reached the "better parts" I'm always talking about



Thought whatever they are better is debatable I guess

[Nazou]

Spoiler:

Nice ending man. way to make everybody die, even before the end of the world

[darkclaymore]

Spoiler:

Nice ending man. way to make everybody die, even before the end of the world

Spoiler:

Well, yeah. I just love being sadistic I guess . Though I assume some people, like vampko for example, most likely won't like this ending much. I had an idea for a second season in which I'd explain one more crucial thing which will make this ending look much more "meaningful" and not just "sadistic". But... I'm not sure whatever I'll ever do it

And man... you sure able to read my works awfully fast. If more people were able to read it this well, the world would be a better place

[vampko]

Well, I was planning to read just 3 chapters....but I kinda went from chapter 10, all the way to chapter 33

It's pretty interesting, not a big fan of how the plot is going so far, but that's just personal preference. It's done very well I'd say. Minus all the bad grammar and typos xD

Grammar nazis would not be able to read this comic. Which is kind of sad, because it's a really good read ~

[Nazou]

Spoiler:

Nice ending man. way to make everybody die, even before the end of the world

Spoiler:

Well, yeah. I just love being sadistic I guess . Though I assume some people, like vampko for example, most likely won't like this ending much. I had an idea for a second season in which I'd explain one more crucial thing which will make this ending look much more "meaningful" and not just "sadistic". But... I'm not sure whatever I'll ever do it

And man... you sure able to read my works awfully fast. If more people were able to read it this well, the world would be a better place

Spoiler:

I think the deaths went smoothly, their reasons for trying to destroy the world on the other hand were kind of meh...except W, his motive is totally acceptable.

And this is just because I currently don't have an ocupation, other people have school/work to go and stuff...

EDIT:

It's pretty interesting, not a big fan of how the plot is going so far, but that's just personal preference. It's done very well I'd say. Minus all the bad grammar and typos xD

Grammar nazis would not be able to read this comic. Which is kind of sad, because it's a really good read ~

Advantages of sucking in grammar. I miss almost all the mistakes of this kind

[darkclaymore]

Well, I was planning to read just 3 chapters....but I kinda went from chapter 10, all the way to chapter 33

It's pretty interesting, not a big fan of how the plot is going so far, but that's just personal preference. It's done very well I'd say. Minus all the bad grammar and typos xD

Grammar nazis would not be able to read this comic. Which is kind of sad, because it's a really good read ~

I'm a TOTAL idiot for not making the characters joke about the grammar and typos. If I were to make the characters joke about the grammar and typos at least at some point, then it would become part of the comic and all well that ends well.

And I figured you might not like some things in this part of the comic. But at least I warned the readers beforehand

Spoiler:

Nice ending man. way to make everybody die, even before the end of the world

Spoiler:

Well, yeah. I just love being sadistic I guess . Though I assume some people, like vampko for example, most likely won't like this ending much. I had an idea for a second season in which I'd explain one more crucial thing which will make this ending look much more "meaningful" and not just "sadistic". But... I'm not sure whatever I'll ever do it

And man... you sure able to read my works awfully fast. If more people were able to read it this well, the world would be a better place

Spoiler:

I think the deaths went smoothly, their reasons for trying to destroy the world on the other hand were kind of meh...except W, his motive is totally acceptable.

And this is just because I currently don't have an ocupation, other people have school/work to go and stuff...

Spoiler:

Well, not all villains have reasons you can call "logical" or relate to. Being "bored" is a reason as well. A reason I can relate to anyways

But still. Many people I gave it to promised to read, but then constantly say they "have no time" when I know very well that they spend many hours sitting in Facebook everyday.